Poem By: Angela Lewis
E goes and leaves I behind
E goes on and on and on and
So it goes
Egos
Main E yaks
The man, he yaks
Maniac
Man i ache a little
Maniacal
E goes on and on and on and...
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First, I'd like to say that this is the first poem I've read by a student in this class where I had to really read it twice before it clicked... (I'm naturally blonde and a little slow)... It's so simple, in a way, but yet so complex. It's short, but meaningful. I also love the fact that you can totally tell from her writing that she is a psychology major. She pulls her interests into her art. She has set her hooks into something brilliant, I just wish there was more. This is a brilliant poem as it is now but I think she could develop it into something even better.
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